Pitches made for painting
I have had one of the scariest experiences of my life. I have been reading through all the entries that you have sent to me pitching for one of my paintings. I have been in awe of the long ones, and short ones, laughed at the funny ones, adored the multiple rhyming sequential poems and gawped at one perfectly weird pitch in perfect prose... and of course, I have loved them all.
However, I had to choose, and for a while I was terrified. How was I going to choose? How could I be fair? How could I have promised only one prize? I resisted the temptation to have someone else choose... because that really wouldn't be fair. I promised to chose not great writing, not a great story, but based on my heartfelt response. And, I have had heartfelt responses to some of the entries. I have tried to explain and I can't explain. Two or three entries really touched me. They weren't particularly clever, or well-written....(sorry, folks, but I was innundated with beautifully written prose, poetry and lovey short stories, and for me, the top three entries were not in any of these categories).
Read a selection of them below
Dark Lilies... The Winning Pitch
From Gemma.. The whole scene radiates light and heat and I long to sit again under the shade of a big plane tree.
From Mary O'S
That was in the seventies and the cusp on the Women’s” Movement, which was telling me, “things don’t have to remain like this”. The notion of choice appealed to me. ...more
From Magda
‘Wild blue ’. I have seen the painting picture on your website many times and always was impressed by ITS originality and some kind of power... ...more
From Anne in Australia...
From Frances (1st entry)
From Frances (2nd entry)
And now I’ve come to pay court
To ‘Lillies in Spring’ – that darling
Beguiler-
Oh she has me heart strings taut! ...more
From Frances (3rd entry)
There came a dream to me
That suspended high above my head
‘Lillies in Spring’ smiled down on me! ...more
From Frances (4th entry)
‘Lillies in Spring’ is my favourite
I really can’t tell you why
Except that when I look at her
She makes me want to cry!
It seems I’ve been weeping inwards
And making my innards feel sore
When it’s weeping outward that’s required
To really effect a cure ...more
From Frances (5th entry)
I think there are three main reasons, though there are probably many others.
1) First of all I think you paint to save the world. The same way Seed Savers save seeds, small little life giving organisms from which grow all manner of delights in all their glorious diversity, I think you paint to save the world in little life giving organisms from which grow lots of aesthetic delight, joy, healing and endless and abundant enduring creativity. I think when you paint you are saving the world from sterility and desertification – you are saving seeds of diversity and detail, images of what is passing unnoticed by most of us, and conserving it for when we are ready to look and observe and see and be responsible, response – able. ...more
From Frances (6th entry)
Is it mid-night tonight January 31st,
Or mid-night tonight, February First?
Now forgive me for getting confus-ed
I’d thought it the former
And sweated
To submit all my thoughts by that date...
And all day today I’ve been waiting
Watching the email alert
Wondering why it was taking so long
To announce my destiny, fate! ...more
From Vanda - After 25 years
For twenty five years, Mary Duffy,
(my friend, may I call you that?)
I have remembered you,
hoping (knowing) we would meet again.
Suddenly, today,
I googled you.
(why did I not do that before?)
And here you are.
(you look the same, how can that be?)
Awesome.
As ever.
Yourself. ...more
from John ..For each of us there are the winter ghosts
Winter always brings memories of a former girlfriend, Roberta, who died one Christmas day.
Looking at your painting Winter's Eve I was struck by the fact that the dark days of winter bring their own possibilities and so I wrote these lines : ...more
From Lisa C
From Peter in Florida..
His family was burned out as tenants. His mother was killed and his father had to flee to America because of what he did in retaliation. He left behind 13 kids in Ireland. The youngest was my grandfather.
Years later, Gramps made it to America to join his father, and now we've been Irish-Americans for 3 generations. We reflect on that all the time..... ...more
From Noirin I am drawn backwards to the inky grasses and such greenness and
Poached Eggs ‘Romneya Coulteri’ from Anne...
From Veronica...I like the dream like quality of the painting.
From Mary H
you have been there too
It lives in that moment where day and evening swallow the colour and become a place of one shade ...more
From Anna
It lifts my spirits and makes me feel warm.
I wasn't going to enter as my email don't go through from your site so I nearly moved on. But the picture appeared just before I click off and when I saw it I realized that if I had at least a chance to have it I'd be a fool not to enter!
Anna
From Tom
From Cathal
From Catherine S (1st entry)
But those memories are not going to win me the painting!
So what is it that I like about the painting apart from memories and vibrant colour? ...more
From Catherine S (2nd)
It brings back fond memories of holidays in France. I am right in the village when I look at this painting. ...more
From Fiona...I'd go for the moving on from Monet..
them but I'd go for the moving on from Monet ( a painintg that looks like there are wild orange water lily pads and the woman in the chair, I had a dress like that once. ...more
From Michelle -Afternoon Sun
From Francesca
She was kind, gentle and very sensitive to the sorrows of others. Often, when I was sad or distressed, she would hold my hand gently to comfort me. ...more
From Marie
email "A quck word" you have taken to it like the perverbial
duck!